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Submitted: November 10, 2010
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Make:Panasonic
Model:DMC-FS3
Shutter Speed:10/300 second
Aperture:F/2.9
Focal Length:6 mm
ISO Speed:320
Date Taken:Nov 3, 2010, 2:52:40 PM
Software:Ver.1.0

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Critique by ~PaulaImperatrix Nov 10, 2010, 2:35:19 PM

I have to said that this is a very nice idea, but I have a few things I don't like.
It seems to be that she has a very happy makeup and accesories but her face doesn't transmit anything to me. I like the make up a lot but I thing that if she was smiling it would be better.

I love the frame, It seems very proportionate. Also I think the skin it's too cold and it's a little annoying the hair shadows in the right side of the forehead.

Other little thing for better works next time it's the bra strap (the pink one) that is twisted (I'm still learning to check every detail before I shot the photo!)

Hope this help you improve!

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