There is something you do here that is really really great!
Your background is one color, which makes it easy to add an alternate background.
"In the business" of movie making, this background would be Blue or Green, and you are aware of this. Good job.
Let's get to the model. She is perfect in looks. I would love to see more photos where she might be yelling, or laughing hard, or anything that reveals her natural appearing beauty.
One big mistake, in my point of view, is that her head is chopped off. Girls always complain that us men are too focused on other body parts than the face. And here I am complaining that I want more of her head. Hmmm.
Give us the full head, at a good resolution, and the artist can crop out what he does not need.
The artist can't add "head"... well, unless the artist is doing a "surreal" piece, yes? It is an idea.
One other really really good thing this photographer does (she is The SECOND Grape?), is to shoot the shot with no effects, other than good lighting.
I hope this helps, and it is my point of view only. Other artists may argue.
Your background is one color, which makes it easy to add an alternate background.
"In the business" of movie making, this background would be Blue or Green, and you are aware of this. Good job.
Let's get to the model. She is perfect in looks. I would love to see more photos where she might be yelling, or laughing hard, or anything that reveals her natural appearing beauty.
One big mistake, in my point of view, is that her head is chopped off. Girls always complain that us men are too focused on other body parts than the face. And here I am complaining that I want more of her head. Hmmm.
Give us the full head, at a good resolution, and the artist can crop out what he does not need.
The artist can't add "head"... well, unless the artist is doing a "surreal" piece, yes? It is an idea.
One other really really good thing this photographer does (she is The SECOND Grape?), is to shoot the shot with no effects, other than good lighting.
I hope this helps, and it is my point of view only. Other artists may argue.
Keep up the great work! No raisins here. Gary
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